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Julian hates waiting in line. And he hates telemarketers. So, of course, someone put them together.



"Hey, Nequ, I see LipThick 1, but where's Lipthick 2?"

Not on DA, is where. You can find it on my Furaffinity, SoFurry, or Weasyl galleries.



Chuck Palahniuk is a best-selling writer with a wildly successful movie adaptation, and I've been reading his 36 Essays on Writing, which you can probably find by Googling.

For funsies, I tried to write this story like him. Less emphasis on dialogue, less on character thoughts, strong emphasis on physicality and sensation, none of my standard "someone telling someone else a story" framing device.

And then I wrote two people roleplaying a story.

I think I have a problem.



The headphones are Monster Diamond Tears, and they are exactly as tasteless and overpriced as they sound.*  Shorts from Lady Gaga's "Perfect Illusion" video because, I mean, wow.

* So, y'know, if someone wants to buy me a pair... /joke


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Lovely story!!